Script Changes

During receiving our feedback we had a lot of people said the script wasn't long enough so the story line was unclear. They also suggested that it came further back in the film and we rerecorded it to make the voice slower and more meaningful.

From this feed back we made the following changes to the script.

Originally the voice over said-

'The doctor said brain activity should be maintained, he said looking at old pictures and going through my everyday routine would help. 

It is now-

'I'm on my way back from the neurology unit at the specialist hospital in London. There was only a single thought running through my head that afternoon. The doctors that brain activity should be maintained. He said that looking through old pictures and going through my everyday routine would help. This was my first therapy to help with the retrieval of my memory and i was determined to make it work'