Feedback

Various classes watch our film opening and gave us constructive criticism and advice on what would make our film better and more successful. We received the following feedback:

This person gave us what we considered quite harsh criticism. 

This person gave us some criticism as they didn't think the genre was obvious and they thought we should use dialogue to help make it obvious. 

This was one of the best marks our of 60 that we received. Their only criticism was that the voice over should be further back in the film. 

This person gave us an average mark out of 60 and gave some good advice on how we could make the genre more evident. 

Overall we received both good and bad feedback and on average we received around 37-47 out of 60 for our first draft. We are pleased with this mark as we know it will improve with our final cut. The main things that were brought to our attention that we need to change are:

-There are to many black outs

-Some of the shots are shaky 

-The audience are unsure of the genre in some places

-The audience weren't sure if the black and white parts were in past or not. 

-The voice over is good but should come further back in the film. 

-Needs more dialogue to make the story line more clear.