More feedback

We edited our final opening scene using the feedback we recieved fromoir draft. We then asked our teacher to watch it, she gave us the following things to change before giving in our final cut-

We need to look at pur titles research and pit the titles in the right order

They need to be 2-3 seconds each

Part of the coice over doesnt make sense so we will delete the part saying she want to 'achieving my memories'

More photographic effects- freeze frames before they play

Sort music out- they change to quickly so it doesnt make sense 

Bowling alley and ice hockey shots are too long so we need to delete a few seconds off each