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I would give this film opening 56/60 so it is a high level 4. I have now watched it a number of times and it has taken me around three times to actually understand what is happening. The writing in some places is to small and is only on the screen for a short period of time but is vital to know what is going on. This makes it almost impossible to figure out the story if you only watch it once. However once i figures out the story line I was intrigued to want to find out what happens next in the film, The acting from the girl is very believable so it engages the audience, the effects they have used are very advanced so I haven't seen them in any other film openings but they make it very realistic. They have used simple titles so they don't distract from the other text and images. To improve i think they needed to not rush through the text and also use some different camera angles as they have only used one or two. 




I would give this film 53/60, again the story line is not fully clear to the audience, we don't know who the girl in the footage is or why they are in the middle of no where. However the voice over is very believable as his voice sounds robotic and shaky like he is nervous and being made to do something he maybe doesn't want to. They have used many different camera angles, tracking shots, low and high shots, mid/long, close ups and also used effects to make some shots blurred and some doubles or lapsed. To improve i would suggest trying to make the camera less shaky as in some places it moves a lot when the shot is supposed to be static. I would also say they need to change the order of some of the shots, one moment he is sat in the car watching the girl, the next he is sat on a hill, the shots don't flow into one another.